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I wrote a review article for journalism, and only had about two hours for it. What age group/grade would you think wrote this? (Also, please keep an open mind despite your opinions on the topic)

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Imagine waltzing into a clothing store and immediately being hit with the fragrant smell of the sweet yet alluring scent of Gloomy Bear fragrance super-sweet Invader Zim perfume and the indescribable aroma of Twilight spray. You quickly register the aromas in your head as you begin listening to the music. It’s a fantastic, unusual song by any band from Nevershoutnever!, All Time Low, Cartel, Slipknot, My Chemical Romance, Panic at the Disco, Fall Out Boy, you name it! As you glance to your left, you see a vast array of tee shirts, some with the YouTube star Fred, some from the hit books and movie Twilight, and some with cartoons! There are eye-catching band tees with bands from Katy Perry to The Beatles, from Paramore to My Chemical Romance! You can find classic rock, rap, alternative, modern rock, pop, virtually any genre of music—you can find a tee shirt with it on it! Hot Topic has unique, eye-popping skinny jeans with neons and animal prints! The jeans are all fashionable and great for any styles! You can get black, yellow, green, blue, purple, pink, white, regular denim, red, and every color on the color-wheel…Plus more! They also carry unexpected designs on bags, wallets, and jewelry that you wouldn’t think could look good on something! Who else could incorporate a Nintendo onto a wallet? Or Mario onto a tote? Hot Topic is the only store I’ve ever seen with such unique designs! Another thing about Hot Topic—they sell the most amazing tutus! These fluffy skirts come in all different colors, and are perfect to wear any Tuesday for Tutu Tuesday! Everyone is welcome to wear one, and no one will be wearing the same one! They come in pink with black, purple with green, pink with green, lime green, teal, pink, yellow, white, many more…even plaid! But, my favorite parts of the store are the accessories and Living Dead Dolls. The accessories vary from enormous bows to zipper-style earrings! The Living Dead Dolls are porcelain dolls—with a twist! These dolls are decked from head-to-toe in eerie clothes and they all have a charismatic story to go with them! There’s the Unwilling Donor doll, the Vanishing Hitchhiker doll, the Raven doll, based off of Edgar Allan Poe’s famous poem called The Raven, even dolls for Friday the 13th enthusiasts! They have Jason dolls, complete with a mask, tattered clothes, and penetrating eyes.

Hot Topic not only has tutus and creepy dolls, they have clothing great for all styles! Once you look inside the store, you can see tee shirts with funny cartoons and your favorite characters. If you can’t find what you’re looking for, you can always consult one of the helpful employees! Their employees are friendly and kind to anyone and everyone, no matter what age, shape, size, or style! With Hot Topic’s wide selection of tops, shoes, skirts, shorts, jeans, tees, belts, suspenders, jewelry, perfume, and accessories, you could stay in there for hours on end! But one thing I don’t like about the store is the Twilight fan-memorabilia because the store doesn’t have as much other things because Twilight is taking up their spots. Another thing I don’t like is that the store only gets a majority of their Skelanimals products near the holidays, limiting when people can buy it. Overall, it’s a really great store to shop at for anything you need!

If you like the store Max Rave, then you would love Hot Topic! Both stores carry neon clothes, animal print garments, skinny jeans, unusual attire, both have a charismatic and almost dark atmosphere. The only big differences between the two stores are that Hot Topic carries band tees and is more music-oriented, and is also for both genders, while Max Rave is for girls and also, the majority changes to every season, while Hot Topic stays generally the same for all four.

If you want a store with a vast variety of clothes and accessories, then Hot Topic is the right place to shop! I give it 4 ½ stars! I would have rated it a 5, but I don’t like, as before mentioned, that the store is cluttered with Twilight clothes and accessories and that Skelanimals are only sold there two months from the whole year. Overall, this is a fantastic place to shop no matter what your age is! If you need any clothes, this is the place to go, with its immense variety and quick-moving lines; it’s my favorite store and it just might l be yours in the near future!

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Thanks!
Ahh, I just noticed that in the sentence that talks about perfumes I TOTALLY forgot commas.
That’s because I had just added the Gloomy Bear thing and I messed it up.
I’m terrible in Word.
Also, in my document, all the "Twilight"s, "Invader Zim"s, etc. are italicized. (Sp?)

Looks like high school level to me .

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